Editor’s Note: This school year, we are highlighting individual lessons from our CrossTalk education project, Essential Everyday Bravery: Thinking and Talking about Identity and Difference in Your Classroom. To learn more, check out the CrossTalk webpage. Earlier we featured a lesson by Baltimore teacher Amber Phelps, who gets students thinking deeply about identity and vulnerability through asides in two plays: William Shakespeare’s The Merchant of Venice and Aaron Posner’s District Merchants. In this lesson, her colleague gets students creating their own inner monologues. To access the resources mentioned in this lesson—and to download the complete packet of CrossTalk lessons—go here.
WHAT’S ON FOR TODAY AND WHY
Students will analyze the impact of a character speaking a monologue that only the audience can hear, focusing on how and why a play wright includes an inner monologue in a play. After analysis of the inner monologue in District Merchants, students will create their own, based upon cultural misunderstandings.
WHAT TO DO
- Teachers should pass out the Scene 4 script (District Merchants 1.4) and have students read the scene out loud, in pairs.
- After reading, students will specifically examine Nessa’s inner monologue, and answer the following questions:
- Why does Nessa choose to speak to the audience rather than the other character onstage? Describe the issues that make the speech too uncomfortable to deliver to the other person.
- Underline words and punctuation that make the speech seem conversational.
- What punctuation is used? What kinds of words and sentence structures are used?
- Note how the playwright shifts between the “real” scene and the inner monologue.
- The teacher will lead a class discussion about the inner monologues we have in our everyday lives by posing a series of questions, such as:
- What would you like to say to your parent or teacher while you are being scolded?
- What would you like to say to a romantic interest you are too afraid to ask on a date?
- What would you like to say to someone who you need something from, but is rude to you (such as a classmate in a group project, or a repair man who will fix your phone inexpensively)?
- The teacher will shift the discussion to talking about culture, and what cultural barriers compel Nessa to address the audience rather than Portia. For example, What would you like to say to someone of a different race, culture, religion, or age group who might not understand what you are going through?
- The teacher tells students to continue to brainstorm ideas for what situation an inner monologue would be especially relevant, and, at the same time, to think about what the other person on stage might be feeling at that moment, too.
- Students should then begin to craft their own scene which freezes and has two inner monologues delivered. Students should make their scene a pastiche of District Merchants:
- A situation like an iceberg, where there is a bit on the surface but much is left unsaid: this is where the inner monologue will be revealed
- Conversational style, with use of informal punctuation and sentence structure
- A shift between the surface conversation and the inner monologues
- After completing the inner monologues, the class will complete (perhaps volunteer) staged readings of the scenes.
HOW DID IT GO?
■ Did students analyze how District Merchants’ playwright (Aaron Posner) incorporates internal monologues and why?
■ Were the students able to examine several examples of instances in which an internal monologue might happen, and then extend that into discussing how cultural differences can bring this about too?
■ Were students engaged in the writing of their own scene with internal monologues, and do the monologues reveal truths that wouldn’t otherwise be expressed?
VARIATIONS, EXTENSIONS, OR OTHER COMMENTS
■ Differentiation: students with learning disabilities can have a modified assignment with only one internal monologue.
■ An extension might be to extend the scene into a full one-act play.
■ Students can be encouraged to perform their scenes to different cultural groups at school.
SUPPLEMENTAL TEXTS AND RESOURCES
■ Crumbs from the Table of Joy by Lynn Nottage (use of internal monologues throughout)
■ The Edge of Seventeen (movie directed by Kelly Fremont Craig, features several internal monologues)
■ Everybody Hates Chris (inner monologues, television show)
■ Americanah by Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie (several internal conversations about race in America, plus use of blog posts which serve as a sort of internal monologue)